Fine Line

Trying to keep my balance,
skittering across that
fine line you spoke of.

Narrow, golden thread separating
love and hate
madness and genius.

Skate that line, you said
and I would have
the best of both worlds.

The pain of your leaving
counterbalanced, against
the pleasure of your return.
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Gillian
May 25, 2004

I love your writing, Gillian. Its so concise and the words are so beautifully simple, have you ever thought of writing haiku?

Dear Maria -

Thank you....

I've written a few Haiku - hey - that rhymes. But I'm not very good at it. I find it a very difficult format to work with. Perhaps a little too structured for me? I'll post a couple of them if you like and you can let me know what you think.

Love,
Your Other Gillian

Other Gillian!:D

I opened a haiku thread, I am sure it will be beautiful! And I am looking forward to reading yours!

PS Jason said he had written some haiku, too, let's see if he can find his!