just a little something i wrote

This is a poem I wrote about three months ago in math class. (math class is just writting time for me, lol) when i was transfering it onto the board...i realized how bad it is. i really dont' like it. then again, i dont like alot of my stuff. anyway, i h



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One day it'll be my time
When I cry
When the earth dies

When will people learn
That death is nothing to fear
Life is so empty
There is nothing left here

So what if I'm still standing?
It dosen't matter much when you don't have friends
So what if I wake up tommrow morning?
I'm just going to be ignored again
So what if I make it through today
Tommrow's just gonna be the same

I never asked to be born
I never asked to be alone
I never asked to have this much hatred for the world
I never asked for everyone to be wrong
I never asked to be right
I never asked to live this long
I never asked to fight
I never asked to be strong

I know i'm still young
That's more the reason I need what I want
I'm sick of people telling me I should be happy with what I've got
That I've got the whole world by the tail
But I'd trade all of that insignificant 'happiness' just to be loved
Isn't that only fair?

Why is it wrong to want to be killed?
Why is it wrong to want to feel?
Why is it wrong to want to die?
Why wont God send me a sign
Is it because i'm not good enough for his palace in the sky?

One day it'll be my time
When I cry
When the earth dies

I like your poem alot but it also makes me sad that you feel this way.

keep on writing!

have you ever gone to some of the poetry sites online?

this poem is how i feel a lot of the time. and this poem is defently one of my more "softcore" ones. i've been suffering from deep depression since i was 12, and i've been writing poetry a little before then as well. i feel it's such a great way to exspress myself. if you want to read more, i guess i'll be happy to post it. all though i didn't like this one

If the moderator has a problem with it, she'll let you know. I'm going to post a couple darker ones I wrote when I was your age... if you want to start writing online here, I say its a probably a great place to get feedback. ;)
~phosphorescent

Great poem Poet!

I started writing poetry around age 12... I find it really is a great way to express yourself. I have found that most of my poems have been inspired by love but when I was a teen, I wrote a couple of darker things as well.

I think most of us have a struggle through teen years and today, it is so much harder than years ago. There are so many more pressures and demands for younger people now.

My daughter has went through bouts of depression as well, she is 16. She takes an anti-depressant and that seems to really help her. She is also in counseling... she has a lot of anger that she needs to work out.

Keep sharing your poems!:)