another poem of mine

this is another one of the MANY poems i've written. i had to edit out the swear words, because i'm pretty sure the moderator wouldn't like that...unless they wouldn't mind? anyway enjoy. oh yeah, just so you know, my poems are my children. if you plagiarize ANY of my work, i swear i'll hunt you down and make sure you never write any thing ever again. i'll become the darkness that enters your room at night. i'll become the fury that takes over men's minds and destorys them from the inside out. i swear. anwyay, enjoy! :-)

"A Dying Breed"


They say that when god closes a door
he opens a window
but when he slammed the door on my face the window was still closed
this is fight or flight
but I can't do the either cause I have the right to die
the only thing I hate more then life, is my life
If I ever got a girlfriend
the world would end
I'm more than sure of it
I never asked to be born
I just wanna crawl back up into the womb and be left alone
I took twenty pills, and the only thing I regret is not taking twenty more
why would anyone love me for?

I know man, it's insane
if you think life's gonna turn around/better think again
I've hit rock bottom, I ain't got nothing emotionally
I'm running on 'E'
only cause of my needs
what the hell do they want from me?
I might as well be nameless
when I'm dreaming I curse the world when I'm awake again
I know it's better to light a match then curse the darkness
but I was brought up in a world that's thoughtles
just crawl up into my coffin
and travel to the land of the forgotten
I'm living there now, because I'm invisible
I never thought living could be this miserable
but maybe I should look towards the sun
I shouldn't think about death before it comes, but I do anyway
I'm getting head pains from carrying this heavy weight

I sit in this dark world
creating my artwork
based on why life has to be hard for
Maybe it's best I don't drive, because I might tug on the wheel to make the car swerve
I remember two god damn years ago
I was her hero
I remember we'd bounce up and down on her trampoline
She said that no guy before could hold a candle to me
Little did I know she'd become a stampede and trample me
I was her knight in shining armor
but her parents wouldn't like me with their daughter
It's over
I took it and faced it
It took a year, at least I'm leaving with the same things I came with
I always dreamed about becoming famous
I just want respect, and all the fringe benefits

Originally posted by Amina315
"fringe benefits" I think you mean...it's good that you express yourself through your writing...keep it up...

::slaps forhead:: d'oh!!, LoL

I actually like "french" benefits better...

... brings up the image of several french ladies hanging off his arm! LOL. I know, my bad.

Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself... I like your poem and I think it would be great lyrics for a rap song!

YAY 1Love, we're so of the same thought there. Although, I thought more like "Linkin Park" kind of song myself... LOL.

Still like "French" better. Those last two lines would make a great chorus, too.
~phos

Originally posted by fos4snt
YAY 1Love, we're so of the same thought there. Although, I thought more like "Linkin Park" kind of song myself... LOL.

Still like "French" better. Those last two lines would make a great chorus, too.
~phos

Oh yeah, yeah.... Linkin Park too! Awesome~ LOL

Actually when I was reading it, I was doing it as a rap... I don't know, just kind of struck me as such. I was kind of thinking of DMX "I'm slippin, I'm fallin, I can't get up..."