Critiques? (A poem)

You gaze at me with longing of desire
Eyes so intense it reminds me of a sapphire

My soul has been captivated by your warm smile
A smile that I'll never forget even though I'm in denial

How you are such a beautiful creature to behold
More desirable to me than even the purest gold

Are you the one my soul has been searching for
Or is it the will of God that I cannot ignore

You have shown me the beauty of yourself
With you I'm not afraid of being myself

If it is ment to be between me and you
Then fate will show me love that is true

If it is freindship that is ment to be
I'll still love you as a sister to me

. . . great poem but. . .




http://home.zonnet.nl/forum_spam/misc/misc/images/0350.jpg

But why did it show up here today?
Damn postal service. :p

Nice try, taggertail. You bumped it, of course...:p


So, is that your own poem, or someone you know? :D